Showing posts with label POV. Show all posts
Showing posts with label POV. Show all posts

Tuesday, September 28, 2021

Signs of change meet POV

Life has seasons. The weather has seasons. Relationships have seasons. Even our perishable groceries have seasons. What those seasons look like depends on the perspective. For instance, we just entered fall. Where I live, a few trees have a kiss of color. The grass is green and still needs mowing and I still have periwinkles in bloom. 


Seasons of weather

In northern Illinois, where I lived the first half of my life, it is already dropping into the 40’s at night and only warming to the 60s during the day. When I lived in Florida, the seasons as I knew them growing up in the Midwest were turned on their head. Because of the intense summer heat, gardens were started in October. 

Life seasons

Life seasons differ too. The point of view regarding a specific season will also differ. When I was in my mid 20s I had a friend who turned 30 and just sat in his easy chair watching TV at night. At the time, I thought, “That’s what 30 is like!” But he had gone through a difficult divorce, had not children, and his dreams had been dashed. His view of 30 differed from my view of 30 when I got there. 

Different POV equals different story

I remember when my daughter went to Haiti for five weeks and a teen, to help with a number of things. One thing they did was dig a garbage pit. Another, they helped teach to garden. When she returned home just before school was to start, I had thrown away some withered tomatoes from the garden. She stared into the pale and said, “You know, the people in Haiti would eat those.” Same items, different POVs, equals a different story.

Pumping Your Muse writing prompt

For today’s creative writing prompt choose one item from the list below and write a scene that shows the change noticed by your character (or you). Then take the same item and write another short scene from a differing POV.

  • Look out a window: show the same scene at two different times of life. Let thoughts of the character reflect the seasons of life.
  • Show two people with a fresh relationship that is close. Show passage of time and a different perspective on the same relationship (if it no longer exists memories of the relationship).
  • Use some perishable item as the centerpiece to your scene. First scene it is fresh, and the scene is full of hope and dreams. The second scene show the same item stale, spoiled, petrified, etc. Think of Miss Havisham in Great Expectations as she talks to Pip. “What do you think that is?” she asked me, again pointing with her stick; “that, where those cobwebs are?”
      “I can’t guess what it is, ma’am.”
      “It’s a great cake. A bride-cake. Mine!”

 

Photo credits: June Campbell, wikimedia

 

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About The Inheritance by Donna Sundblad

Written within the allegorical tradition of classics like Pilgrim's Progress, The Inheritance offers a literal but symbolic story for today's fantasy enthusiasts. This cleverly devised tale doesn't tell you what to think, but stimulates thought as to why you believe what you believe in your own quest for the Eternal City. The Inheritance is an ideal discussion starter for youth groups, homeschoolers, and families who enjoy meaningful discussions. 

 


The Inheritance is available on Kindle, paperback on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo (Christian fiction), Smashwords and Google Books. When you read it, be sure to leave a review! Thanks for your support. 

About Dragonborn by Donna Sundblad


Dragonborn conjures up a winning fantasy with dragons, humans, time travel, and magic. Follow young Ervig Greenfields as he seeks out dragons to remove a curse. The dragons offer access to the Labyrinth of Times, which will purge the dark magic. But there’s a catch. Erving must vow allegiance to fight alongside dragons for centuries, never to return to his own time. He and a handful of others take the selfless oath and become Dragonborn. The Dragonborn and their dragons become seeds of change, in this epic tale, of sacrifice for the greater good. Ride along with them as they slip through a tear in time to the past to change the future.

 

Tuesday, June 04, 2013

Change POV and change the story

I had finished writing a creative non-fiction story and felt disappointed. I knew the story had potential, but it fell flat. I asked a friend to take a look, and she suggested changing the POV from third person to first person. The change breathed life into the piece and it was accepted for publication.



That short story was accepted for publication. And learning that change in POV trick has inspired my novel writing as well. In my Dragonborn series, I often use another character's POV to help answer a question. When my main character must accomplish something the question I most often ask is why? Not only why are they doing it, but why do they feel this way do about it, and even ask why what they are doing is important. 
 
For instance if a barking dog is keeping your character awake, knowing why the dog is barking provides additional details. 
If the reader is going to care, they must understand why so they can feel what the character feels. Another character's POV can often reveal the why and answer the other important questions that bring about that engaging understanding writers seek for their readers. 
 

Other questions that must be answered

  • Who? You can leave mystery as to who, but in such cases, you do want to generate curiosity as to who.
  • What? I'll use the Dragonborn world again as an example. In this fantasy series, characters time through travel in four different ways. The Labyrinth of Times, the Midlands, tears in time, and the obelisk, which I have not named as yet. It is one thing for a character to know about them and what they do, but what are they? If you create something characters use or experience, your readers must be able to envision what they are. With these fictional fantasy elements, I learned details from the dragon POV as well as that of Dragonborn humans, and even through the evil antagonist.
  • Where? This goes back to creating a setting readers experience rather than just something they know about. If your main character is operating in a stark world, show them from another character's POV and you'll see many details you can add to the original scene. If there isn't a second character, get your details from a reflection of the person. Yes, have the reflection tell the story from its POV as it looks back into the real world setting.
  • How? How do things work? In fantasy and science fiction writing, it is necessary to educate readers to understand how things work. It's the same with historical fiction, mysteries; you name it. Readers need to know how things work, but not through an information dump, and not through author intrusion. It needs to be in an experiential way. Writing from another POV can often help you find the answers you are looking for, as they see how things work, or are taught how things work or even read about how things work. 
 

Today's Pumping Your Muse writing prompt

Today's prompt is a photo prompt. Write a short scene or story based on one of the two photos I've included. Based on the first picture, write using the POV of the person or one of the animals pictured. Or choose to write from the reflection in the second photo. If you really want to see the difference POV can make, write two pieces from two different points of view. Using this trick often helps me find the "magic" that makes many a story work.

Photo credits: Michelle Cox, Norma Desmond

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About The Inheritance by Donna Sundblad

Written within the allegorical tradition of classics like Pilgrim's Progress, The Inheritance offers a literal but symbolic story for today's fantasy enthusiasts. This cleverly devised tale doesn't tell you what to think, but stimulates thought as to why you believe what you believe in your own quest for the Eternal City. The Inheritance is an ideal discussion starter for youth groups, homeschoolers, and families who enjoy meaningful discussions. 

 


The Inheritance is available on Kindle, paperback on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Kobo (Christian fiction), Smashwords and Google Books. When you read it, be sure to leave a review! Thanks for your support. 

Coming soon! Dragonborn by Donna Sundblad

Dragonborn conjures up a winning fantasy with dragons, humans, time travel, and magic. Follow the journey of the young prisonguard, Ervig Greenfields, as he seeks out dragons to remove a curse. The dragons offer him access to the Labyrinth of Times, which will purge the dark magic. But there’s a catch. Erving must take the Dragon Oath that requires allegiance--to fight alongside dragons for centuries, never to return to his own time. He and a handful of others take the selfless oath and become Dragonborn. The Dragonborn and their dragons become seeds of change, in this epic tale, of sacrifice for the greater good. Ride along with them as they slip through a tear in time to the past to change the future.

 

Thursday, September 11, 2008

Learning From a Different POV


Point of view (POV) offers readers a glimpse into the world you've creative on paper. Based on this POV, they take in visual and other sensory information limited to that POV. For example, if you have three characters in a scene, and it is written from an outside POV--readers will not know the characters' thoughts or feelings. Instead they must make determinations based on what is said and in interpreting body language.

Today's Prompt:

Today we're going to have fun with POV. Take out an existing story (preferably one of your own) and write it from another POV.

Note: If you're ever stuck at a point in a story you're working on, this is a great way to get unstuck. You may never use the additional scene, but information gleaned from it can help you get on with writing.

Saturday, January 27, 2007

Training

  • Boot camp is a training place--strict training.
  • Potty training is a process.
  • On-the-job training teaches new skills.
  • Drivers education allows stuents to learn how to drive.

    Develop a character in a training scenario. Write the scene from either the POV of the one doing the training OR the one receiving the training. Either way, weave in elements of emotions and feeling involved.

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