Showing posts with label writing exercise. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing exercise. Show all posts

Monday, December 05, 2022

Writing exercise for the muse: picture prompt

Today's Pumping Your Muse prompt is a picture prompt writing exercise. I chose these images to challenge your muse to describe something new with elements of things familiar. As writers, no matter our genre, we will come across things we need to describe that stump us. The more we write, the more we learn to overcome these challenges. 


I remember when writing The Inheritance coming across a scene where it said the character gave an incredulous look. I stopped. The choice of words showed nothing. It screamed "passive telling." Something we don't want in our writing. I looked up the word hoping to find a something more descriptive but it didn't help. So I went into the bathroom and looked into the mirror and practiced giving an incredulous look. That visual helped me find the words I needed. You know, the lip curling into a sneer kind of thing.


Today's writing exercise: picture prompt

Using a picture prompt can do the same with your backdrop; your worldbuilding. I chose the image below because I think it is different enough to challenge most of you, but also creative enough to inspire fantasy writers and children's writers. The idea is to challenge your muse to describe what you see, but don't limit it to the sense of sight. Include strong verbs that let the reader feel, smell, and sense where they are. If this picture doesn't inspire, use one of the others above.


The benefit of this writing exercise

Why practice describing something unfamiliar, different, or unknown to you? Because you will come across such things in your writing. When I was ghostwriting western romance, I had plenty of things I had to research and describe. Like the inside of a train carrying passengers from New York to Cheyenne. As a fantasy writer, I often describe things not of this world. What does the portal look like? How does it work? Does it have a smell? Or showing how magic works. In my current WIP, one of the characters has the ability to make things grow, and when he comes across a swath of trees cut down by loggers, he uses his magic to tap into the life in the stumps and regrow the trees quickly. I thought time lapse photography, but what about how it feels? What about the smell? Include the senses as your write your description. Enjoy the journey!

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Thursday, October 27, 2022

Sense of touch writing prompt

As writers we seek to create words that leave the page and create an image in the mind of readers. Not a static image, but a moving picture that draws the reader into a corporeal experience. Russian born American writer Ayn Rand said it this way. "Words are a lens to focus one's mind." If the reader walks through a field with our character we want them to hear the crunch of snow under boots, or feel the stiff winter breeze make eyes water, smell the wood smoke in the crisp air, and when we spot the cabin in the distance we want them to draw a conclusion. In other words, we work to engage the senses and sometimes it’s not as easy as one would think.


Today’s writing prompt is and exercise in the sense of touch. It is designed to help practice putting into words tangible details of what our hands feel and the thought process as we take in that information. For instance, if you touch an orange, what does it feel like? It’s easy to come up with words for how it tastes: Tangy, tasty, sweet, sour, delicious, or juicy. But how does it feel? If I tossed one to you and you caught it, you might say it feels like a ball. But what of the texture and other features? Is it smooth, rough, or somewhere in between? What about its weight? What is its shape? Is it big or small? Wide or narrow? Squishy or hard? Solid or springy?


Sense of touch writing prompts

For this writing prompt, I offer a couple of possibilities.

1) For this first writing exercise it is helpful to have a buddy. Tell them you will be playing a game where you will be blindfolded and will have to guess what you are touching. Have them select random items and place them in a box. I suggest at least 10 things and a box at least the size of a shoe box.
 
Equipped with your box of things, video your blindfolded self guessing what it is you are touching. With each item, talk out loud about what you feel and what you think as you figure it out. What led you to your conclusion? That is the gold you seek in your writing. The details you want to include in your writing. 
 

 

2) The second writing prompt option is to do something new. Again, video yourself during the experience. Talk about what you feel and what you think. Here are a few ideas.

  • Get a pedicure
  • Go for a walk in the rain
  • Get a massage
  • Try waxing some part of your body
  • Give yourself a facial

Practicing the expression of the thought process in relation to the sense of touch will help prepare you to bring life to your writing. Have fun with this one!

Thursday, December 16, 2021

Connect the dots with 60s songs

 

This writing prompt is inspired by a book I’m currently reading titled, “Purple Haze” by Andrew Einsprunch. It’s a YA fantasy loaded with humor at many levels. One agent he uses to deliver humor are song titles and lyrics or, I should say, a play on song titles and lyrics. Granted, if the reader doesn’t know the song or recognize the reference to the lyrics in the story they will miss out on the joke, but they are hard to miss for those familiar with them. And, they blend well enough into the dialog of the story, that those who don’t get it, will carry on reading probably unaware of the gem they just missed.


Pumping Your Muse writing prompt

With this fresh on my mind, I thought about playing a game of connect the dots with popular 60s song titles to come up with a scene or short story. Challenging but fun, right? It’s a great way to find a new creative nugget for your muse to mine.

Choose at least three to five 60s songs titles from this song list and connect them with a plot thread using the genre of your choice.

  • Brown Eyed Girl (Van Morrison)
  • Pale Blue Eyes (Velvet Underground)
  • Mustang Sally (Wilson Pickett)
  • Barbara Ann (Beach Boys)
  • Help Me Rhonda (Beach Boys)
  • Bernadette (Four Tops)
  • Can’t Take My Eyes Off of You (Frankie Valli)
  • Save the Last Dance for Me (The Drifters)
  • Louie Louie (The Kingsmen)
  • Sugar Sugar (The Archies)

 


  • I Can’t Get No Satisfaction (Rolling Stones) – For this one you can just use the title “Satisfaction” if you prefer.
  • Fortunate Son (Credence Clearwater Revival)
  • These Boots are Made for Walking (Nancy Sinatra)
  • White Rabbit (Jefferson Airplane)
  • Born to be Wild (Steppenwolf)
  • Eight Days a Week (Beatles)
  • Piece of My Heart (Janis Joplin)
  • I Heard it Through the Grapevine (Marvin Gaye)
  • I’m a Believer (The Monkees)
  • House of the Rising Son (Animals)

Once you discover your character(s), if you find them interesting, do a character interview to learn more about them. You'll be surprised where it can take you.

A sample connect the dot writing exercise
Born to be wild by Donna Sundblad

A hooded brown eyed girl with caramel skin and long wavy ebony ringlets stood before me. “Are you Mustang Sally?” She closed her eyes without answering. A wave of dizziness washed over me. I thrust my arms out to the side trying to keep my balance. The spinning sensation eased and I opened my eyes. “What was that?”

The girl’s eyes fluttered open. Her icy pale blue eyes sent a chill down my spine. Feline features transformed her face. I couldn’t move. Fear clutched me. I wanted to scream, but I only squeaked out, “I can’t take my eyes off of you.”

She moved her head from side to side purring with her tongue as she released me. “Louie, Louie. I warned you but did you listen? I am born to be wild.”

 

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