Showing posts with label beyond the fifth gate. Show all posts
Showing posts with label beyond the fifth gate. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Action - Writing a Fight Scene

Writers often draw on personal experience to help bring their writing to life. Fight scenes can be hard to write for those of us who don't have that experience in our personal arsenls.al. Today's writing prompt is designed to help hone those skills.
 
 

In my book Beyond the Fifth Gate I needed several fight scenes. For me it was a challenge, but I found help from stuntman and actor Teel James Glenn in his book Them's Fighting Words. He recommended watching a movie fight scene for inspiration. This worked for me. I watched more than one fight scene. As I did, I paused it, wrote, sometimes rewinded, as I captured moves that happen so fast you often don't think about it. But on paper, you need those quick moves to show your reader what is happening. This is only one way to develop an understanding of all that's involved in writing action/fight scenes. 


Pumping Your Muse Writing Prompt

For today's writing prompt, watch a movie fight scene. I recommend a scene that uses skills you what to describe. For instance, if your character will be using a sword, then a sword fight. If a staff, a fight scene that incorporates a staff. Write out the action. Don't be surprised...you'll need to do some research to complete this prompt in order to know what to call moves, weapons, etc. But the final product will make your fight scene come alive.

  • Watch a fight scene. 
  • Research what moves are called. 
  • Watch the fight scene again and write out the moves. 

About Dragonborn by Donna Sundblad

A captivating story of love, magic, and adventure for readers young and old. In this epic tale of sacrifice for the greater good, Dragonborn and their dragons become seeds of change traveling through time to change the future.

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Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Create Suspense with Things Unseen

No matter what genre you're writing, a little suspense is a great way to engage your reader. Today's writing prompt challenges you to create suspense by creating something unseen. The challenge is to introduce the element without actually seeing it. This can be done by showing evidence of its existence by using senses other than sight.

Create a suspenseful scene using sounds, smells, and feelings. For instance, if the air turns icy cold a character may suddenly see their breath bloom in a frosty balloon, a strong floral scent in a room could mark the presence of an entity, or the hair on the back of the neck prickling can create suspense. Bring the reader to the edge, make them hungry to know what it is they don't see by providing evidence that it is there.

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